
Orchids
Bright lips lean into each other over the lazy balcony,
their purple locks beckon strangers to stop and admire
their Saturday song, petals coy like feathers floating
along the streets of Flanders.
The morning is alive in the air,
dancing on your breath like thoughts
of first snow in October,
a time when scarves checkered with solitude
come too soon to say “goodbye.”
A motorcycle, bright as cherry, tilts into the gutter,
expecting to disappear from the monochromic winter,
its engine a beautiful snapshot as a memory months before
how you felt those hands holding you, holding orchids
crushed against the heart, begging to stay
until the season got better and you recovered
from the thought of leaving once again,
before lavender returned to the eyes,
gazing high above the balcony window.
© Rebecca Goes Rendezvous, 2025
Wonderful poetry. Glad to see a poem of yours, Rebecca. Well done.
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Thanks, Rebecca!
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This is beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for reading!
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Such a beautiful poem!
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Thanks, Lyssy!
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Beautiful poem! ♡
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Thank you!!
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Beautiful. I would love to read more of your poetry.
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I have many! You can check out more poems in the “Poetry” section of my blog 🙂
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Will do!
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Quel beau! I’m not good at poetry, but I always appreciate a good one.
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Merci! Poetry is a fine craft, but really, anyone can write it! I appreciate your support, Bama 🙂
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You paint such vivid pictures with your beautifully crafted words, dear Rebecca. Thanks for sharing, and have a good day 🙂 Aiva xx
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Thank you so much, Aiva! Have a wonderful day as well 😊
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Thank you kindly, and right back at you, dear Rebecca 🙂 xx
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Lovely Rebecca, very evocative with a touch of melancholia which is always good in my book. I like the imagery of petals as lips and, I must say, the idea of not only one but all motorcycles tilting into the gutter. (and preferably disappearing forever ha ha). Now I’m off to buy an orchid for our apartment 😉
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Thanks, Leighton! This poem had been sitting in my drafts for years, and I consider this my love letter to France: a bit melancholic, a bit bittersweet, but also full of nostalgia and good memories in between. Get that orchid!! 😊
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That’s beautiful! It is perfect for this time of year too I think, going from bright and coloured summer to the muted and soft autumn.
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Indeed! It was around this time 10 years(!) ago that I was in Lille as the leaves were changing. Such a beautiful part of the year!
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Lovely!
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Thanks, Ruth!
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